The Box

This week we had to share a blog like we do every week 😀 This week I chose my long lost story the box that I started back in term 2. I have being working on paragraphs.
Do you know how to use paragraphs ? 😀😀😀😀

THE BOX  
Ding dong, Ding dong I got out of my bed and checked the time it was 1:00pm so I woke up Max, Sam and James (my quad triple brothers ). We crept down stairs and opened the door and there was a big black box at the door. We tried to open it but the tape on the box was stuck so we bought it inside. We decided to go and get mum and dad but mum and dad were gone! We began to panic so I had to calm them down I said ‘pull yourself together!!!!’ Now we have to look for clues I said hey look! There is our first clue what does it say it said dear Max, Reuben and Sam when you see this I will be in Russia go into the kitchen and you will find another clue read it and you will see and also bring the big black box that you will have at the door Love mum and dad. Well that was interesting ‘now what?’ said Max. We go to the kitchen dummy off we go to the kitchen and search for it. Finally we found it, it was in the oven I grabbed it and read it out loud, it said:
Dear Max, Reuben and Sam if you press these numbers on the oven - 3746 and get in you will find out everything and make sure you bring the box. Love Mum and Dad.


So we enter the numbers and get in we stayed there about 1 minute and then the oven door shut and I started to get worried. The whole thing dropped and we fell and then we stopped and the door opened again so we got out and there was a big room and it was called the safe house it had lots of snacks and drinks. They went down a slid and fell in some plastic bubbles they got out and had a look around at everything they found this button and pressed it the button made a screen spare it was they mum and dad but it was only a message. The message said we are spies from the GI Jones and now we have put you in so much danger because there is a evil spy that turned amazed us and he is after the Box and in the snack bar you will find a big red button and that makes a plan spare and that plan will take you to Russia to see us and bring the Box with you and give it to no one and one thing whatever you do not open the Box. Goodbye. So we press the red button and a plan appear like they said and so we jumped in and we flew off to Russia. It was about a five hour flight we were luckily we had just enough power to get there. We had to put it on autopilot because we don’t know how to drive. We also had a big sleep and luckily we had lots food and water. When we finally got there was a massive mountain. So we got out and look everywhere but we couldn’t find the GI JOES base. We thought we could spot them from higher ground so we climbed up the massive mountain. When we got to the top we look across the island and on the other side we saw a massive GI and in small writing there was JOE'S. We got back in the Plane and flew it to the island. When we got there, there was a door that said THE GI JOE’S. So we knock and someone said what’s the password. We said we don’t know what your talking about and the man said you got it right and then he said come in.


So what brings you here he said. We have come to see our Mum and Dad are they here yes let me show you. We follow him to a underground were we have to wear a helmet and then we see mum and dad in a sell so we start running and running and I managed to get into one of the vents and sneak away I watched my Mum, Dad and James get questioned. I finally found my brother Max and Sam we then watched and made up a plan. The plan was Sam cut the power and Max is sneaking into the room and unlock Mum, Dad and James and I lead Mum Dad and James to the plane. We all went to work and Sam got caught we will have to make another plan OK I said that plan didn’t work what do we do now ? we do plan B and plan B is. To do the Esau same thing as last but just don’t get caught. We both did the same thing and the plan was a susses

                               

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