Great leaning

By Anonymous -
On Wednesday we had to write about a photo and make a story out of it but we only had to do a paragraph.
I hope you like it.


Wonder woman
One day there was a girl called Wonder. Wonder loved school and she was the most talented and most popular girl there. Until that fateful day when she got home from school and found the police were there talking to her grandma. The police said that her mum and dad died in a head on car crash and then she had run outside screaming. The police final found her up in her tree house looking throw some photo’s of her mum and dad. She was then forced to stay with her grandma and granddad who lived in another part of town which meant that she had to go to another school and make more friends which was never going to be easy.

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  1. AnonymousAugust 16, 2017 at 5:15 PM

    Thanks for sharing Reuben. You have included lots of detail to paint a picture for your reader. What do you think your next step is?

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  2. Jayne August 22, 2017 at 9:56 PM

    Love this beginning Reuben it has drawn me in and now I want to know what happens
    Mum x

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