The next paragraph of Wonder woman

By Anonymous -
Last Wednesday we had to write a character description. I have posted the other paragraph last week I hope you like it. I tried to do complex sentences.
What do you like about my writing ?






Wonder woman
One day there was a girl called Wonder. Wonder loved school and she was the most talented and most popular girl there. Until that fateful day when she got home from school and found the police were there talking to her grandma. The police said that her mum and dad died in a head on car crash and then she had run outside screaming. The police finally found her up in her tree house looking throw some photo’s of her mum and dad. She was then forced to stay with her grandma and granddad who lived in another part of town which meant that she had to go to another school and make more friends which was never going to be easy.

On her first day of school she sat down in her chair and everyone started to laughing because she got the seat that had bubblegum stuck onto it. Luckily Miss Jean came in and said everybody calm down, we have a new student with us today and her name is Wonder, would you like to come up and tell us somethings about yourself. Wonder got out of her chair and said my mum and dad died in a car crash and then she sat down. At morning tea she sat on the swings and these three boys came up and said how's your mum and dad they said. Then she said they are up in heaven and they started to laugh and make fun of her. She then started to cry and the boys started to slap and punch her. After school she was walking home with a bruised face. When she got home her grandma said what happened to your face. Wonder said I fell off the swings      ( which was not true ). The next morning she didn’t want to go to school but she was forced to go. Yet again she got bullied but when she was walking home she fell in a drain and the drain went straight into a cage and that's where a crazy scientist that was doing a crazy thing. The next thing she knows she is in her bed.


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