Game of awesome

This week I did some more writing on game of awesome. My focus this week was to use more paragraphs and next term I will do another paragraph on my blog. Do you now when it is the end of a paragraph?


Steel Bars

James had a job as an engineer, builder and a superhero but no one knew that. James knows how bad his brother can be and he hates taking down his brother John but he has to or John is going to take over the world. But one day John goes too far killing someone that James knows so he has no choice but to take him down and make sure he does not get out of prison. So he set off to find John and now James is the only one who can stop him. It was a long trip travelling from the UK to Australia but James got there, he went to his mum and dad's house but he couldn’t find them. He started to get worried and concerned that perhaps John had got to them first.  He started to call them but they will not pick up the phone and after a while he said to himself I have to go and find John.

His next option was to go to John’s house and sure enough ‘where are mum and dad John said I don’t know, are they here ? As he said that a massive door opened and on it was their mum and dad. John said if you want them back will have to fight me or else mummy and daddy will die. James said alright I will fight you, let's go three, OK  one, two, three.

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