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The next paragraph

This is the next paragraph of wonder woman . I hope you enjoy. I have been working on paragraphs. Do you know how to use paragraphs ? The next morning she wakes up and it’s time for school she quickly gets out of bed and she realise that she was in her school gear already and she didn’t feel hungry at all. So she start to go to school she then realised that the time was 8:59. She started to run and about 5 seconds later she was there. Wonder start to wonder about how she got there so fast. Wonder sat in her chair and started to listening to Miss Jean she said hello class SF we will be doing the hardest test of your life to day just saying the record for this test is 1 day and a half. Everybody groaned, when Miss Jean finally handed the test out she said tell me when you finish your test. We all begin in about 2 seconds later I say done. Miss Jean was so amazed she run out the door and went to the other teachers and started to tell the teachers what happen.

The next paragraph of Wonder woman

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Last Wednesday we had to write a character description. I have posted the other paragraph last week I hope you like it. I tried to do complex sentences. What do you like about my writing ? Wonder woman One day there was a girl called Wonder. Wonder loved school and she was the most talented and most popular girl there. Until that fateful day when she got home from school and found the police were there talking to her grandma. The police said that her mum and dad died in a head on car crash and then she had run outside screaming. The police finally found her up in her tree house looking throw some photo’s of her mum and dad. She was then forced to stay with her grandma and granddad who lived in another part of town which meant that she had to go to another school and make more friends which was never going to be easy. On her first day of school she sat down in her chair and everyone started to laughing because she got the seat that had bubblegum stuck onto it. Luck

Great leaning

On Wednesday we had to write about a photo and make a story out of it but we only had to do a paragraph. I hope you like it. Wonder woman One day there was a girl called Wonder. Wonder loved school and she was the most talented and most popular girl there. Until that fateful day when she got home from school and found the police were there talking to her grandma. The police said that her mum and dad died in a head on car crash and then she had run outside screaming. The police final found her up in her tree house looking throw some photo’s of her mum and dad. She was then forced to stay with her grandma and granddad who lived in another part of town which meant that she had to go to another school and make more friends which was never going to be easy.

Team Building

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This week we have been doing team building tasks. That is when we leaning how to work as a team. 1. Our first task was to make anything out of raw noodles and tiny marshmallows. I was with Matthew, Chortle H, Harriet M and Ben. Our group got first.  2. Stretcher - For this task we had to make a stretcher out of paper, tape and string and then after we had to transport five bit's of books and a full cup of water.  3. Our third one was we had 1 meter of tape and 1 big piece of paper and you had to make a chain. Our chain was the longest and we won. 4. Cup stacking - with this task you had to stack 6 cups without using your hands. Instead we had to use 6 bit's of sting and a rubber band. We were the first team to first finish. Do you communicate well in a group ? Thank you for reading These are some pictures